Setting;It took place at the beach at a wild and rocky place.
Summary: This is about a boy that loved swimming. Jerry and his mother went on vacation to France.He was the only child of his mother. His mother was a widow. He went to the beach everyday.He nagged his mother for swimmng goggles. He wanted to break the record of staying long under water he wanted to feel accepted by other french boys. Jerry also wanted to discover the under water tunnel by swimming through it. Whenever he swam through the tunnel he always got dizzy and his nose would start bleeding.
Main character: Jerry was a very good swimmer and very determined to achieve his goal. He was an eleven year old. He was english. He was the only child.he was full of pride.
Well done,I am afraid it is too short though.It hits the main points but does not really give one much to digest.Also are a few grammatic errors.I will give you a 6 out 10.
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